grammatical and line-break fixes to the OS X installer text

diff --git a/build/osxpack/License.txt b/build/osxpack/License.txt
index b24d890..eb250a6 100644 (file)
--- a/build/osxpack/License.txt
+++ b/build/osxpack/License.txt
@@ -1,11 +1,8 @@
-Lustre(tm) for OS X
+Lustre(R) for OS X

 
 

-This software is a proprietary product of Cluster File Systems,
-Inc. which owns all intellectual property rights to this software.
+This software is a proprietary product of Cluster File Systems, Inc. which owns all intellectual property rights to this software.

 
 

-You must obtain a license from Cluster File Systems and agree to its
-terms before using this software, contact sales@clusterfs.com.
+You must obtain a license from Cluster File Systems and agree to its terms before using this software.  Contact sales@clusterfs.com
+
+This software is beta software modifying and running kernel code.  Back up all systems before use.  This software is provided to you without any warranty, without even the implied warranty of merchantability, or fitness for a particular purpose.  Consult your license agreement for more details.

 
 

-This software is beta software modifying and running kernel code.
-Back up all systems before use.  This software is provided to you
-without any warranty, fitness for purpose or other guarantees.

diff --git a/build/osxpack/ReadMe.txt b/build/osxpack/ReadMe.txt
index 01f3157..06555ba 100644 (file)
--- a/build/osxpack/ReadMe.txt
+++ b/build/osxpack/ReadMe.txt
@@ -1,7 +1,4 @@
 This is release 0.9.2 Beta of the Lustre OS X client.
 
 This is release 0.9.2 Beta of the Lustre OS X client.
 

-This is not a production quality release, use it with care on
-non-production systems.  The installation will overwrite the OS X
-kernel on your system.  Un-installing this package will restore your
-current kernel.
+This is not a production quality release, so use it with care, and on non-production systems.  The installation will overwrite the OS X kernel on your system.  Un-installing this package will restore your current kernel.

 
 

diff --git a/build/osxpack/Welcome.txt b/build/osxpack/Welcome.txt
index ea66183..f6fa0ce 100644 (file)
--- a/build/osxpack/Welcome.txt
+++ b/build/osxpack/Welcome.txt
@@ -1,6 +1,4 @@
 Welcome to the Lustre OS X client installation  
 
 Welcome to the Lustre OS X client installation  
 

-You will be guided through the steps necessary to install this
-software.  During installation you will be required to reboot your
-Mac, so make sure you have saved all your data and closed applications
-before continuing the installation.
+You will be guided through the steps necessary to install this software.  During installation you will be required to reboot your Mac, so make sure you have saved all your data and closed applications before continuing the installation.
+